Bats and Pearls
by admin, Posted in July/August Issuse Stories
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Raindrops fell from the dark velvety sky, dropping delicately onto the world below. A few clouds drifted through in the gloom, covering the moon and few stars that had escaped the light of the city that flourished down the river.
Five fruit bats glided through the air, each trying to find enough food for themselves before the rain started to pour down. The only reason they were staying together was that, if one bat found any sign of food, he wouldn’t be able to get it all for himself.
Four of the five bats flapped a considerably long distance from the last one. They were bigger, with longer wings to allow them to fly farther and faster. They flew out every night to look for food, and they were veterans at it.
The fifth bat was a young creature called Seed. This was his first time venturing out of the cave where he was born. He had been smart enough to go with the most skilled fliers to search for food, but he was quickly tiring. His wings felt like lead. He bit his tongue, struggling to keep up with the others, but he was much smaller than any of them. “Hey, wait up!” he gasped. The other bats didn’t pay any attention. The rain came down harder. A bolt of lightening shot through the air, and a crack of thunder followed quickly after.
The older bats dived, but Seed couldn’t tell where they had gone. “I can’t fly!” he cried, his wet wings flapping uselessly. He tumbled from the sky, down toward the ground.
The world snapped out of view, and numbness spread through him. He was unconscious before
he could cry out.
A muskrat sat on her haunches at the edge of the river, carefully scrubbing the spherical pearl in her paws ofany dirt. She didn’t mind the rain pelting down onto her fur. She kind of liked it,actually. Notlike that silly duck that sat hunched up in her nest as if the rain would
burn her.
The muskrat smiled as she lifted the pearl and watched it sparkle, evidently as clean as it would get. She was just aboutto turn and go back to her lodge when something caught her eye. A dark shape floated toward her. She stood on her hind legs to get a better look at it. It was definitely a creature of some sort, but she couldn’t tell what kind it was.
She waded into the river, the current rushing past her faster than it usually went because of all the rain. The strange creature wasn’t moving—it was either dead or unconscious.
The muskrat seized the animal around the middle with her paws and hauled him to shore. She was enthralled about how this creature looked. It had long, thin membranes stretched across its forelegs, which she guessed served as wings. The bat stirred and coughed. He opened his eyes and stared around at the river. The muskrat gently lifted him into her lodge, which was made of grass, sticks, and dried mud. “Who are you?” the bat asked suspiciously.
He wiped his eyes with his “Me? Oh, I’m Azure,” the muskrat said cheerfully. She looked curiously at the bat.”You’re a bat, aren’t you? How’d you get in the river?” The bat ignored her. She shook her head and stashed the pearl, which she realized she was still holding, behind a pile of sticks. “What was that?” the bat demanded. “Nothing,” Azure replied. “I’m going to catch some fish!” She left rather quickly.
The bat stood on his feet and looked around. The inside of the lodge was completely empty of anything of interest, except perhaps the thing that Azure had stashed away. He decided he would investigate
that later.
“Hey, Bat, have you ever tried fish?” Azure asked, crawling back into the lodge with two pink fish wriggling in her paws. “My name is Seed!” the bat protested. “And I only eat fruit!” He lifted his right wing and licked it, attempting to get it dry. “You’re not even going to thank me for saving your life?” the muskrat asked, appalled. Seed ignored her once more.
He stretched and yawned widely, thenclimbed to the ceiling of the lodge and hung upside down, immediately drifting into dreams filled with apples and pears. Azure curled into a ball and fell asleep as well, planning to teach the little bat some manners in the morning.
Seed’s feet slipped. He landed on the ground with a bump, waking instantly. Fuming, he rubbed his furry head and crept to the entrance of the muskrat lodge. It had stopped raining, and the sun was high in the sky. The bat shielded his sensitive eyes. Azure was paddling skillfully through the water, clutching a fish in her mouth. Seed glared at her. More fish! Why didn’t she go get him some fruit?
He turned and went back inside, his stomach growling. The sunlight was hurting his eyes, and he liked the darkness of thelodge much better. He was about to climb back onto the ceiling when he remembered. What had the muskrat hidden? He reached behind the sticks where she hadput it, and to his amazement he drew out a snow-white pearl. Seed grasped it in hiswing tip and marveled at it.
If he broughtthis back with him to his cave, maybe the others would be so impressed that they wouldn’t leave him alone in the rain the next time they left to find food! He couldn’t dwell on this thought very long, though, because at that moment agunshot rang out, startling him so much that he dropped the pearl. There was a scu√ing from outside, and Azure crawled minto her lodge, out of breath and with wide eyes. “A hunter!” she gasped.
She hurried to the far corner of her lodge and crouched there. “Stay in here.” Seed bit his lip. He wanted to stay out of the hunter’s way, but what better chance did he have of making it out of Azure’s home with the pearl? Cradling the beautiful thing in his wing tip, he stepped to the entrance and sneered at the muskrat.”Do you think the other bats will like this?” he asked, displaying the pearl. Azure opened her mouth, closed it, then turned her stunned look into a ferocious scowl.”Give it to me,” she said menacingly.
Seed’s heart quivered with fear, but the sneer sat frozen on his face. “I don’t think I should give it to you.I mean, you have no real use for it. Andthe bats back home will love me for this!” Seed snickered. “You could try to follow me, I guess. But… oh, yeah! Isn’t muskrat fur valuable to hunters?” Azure lunged at the bat, but he was flying away from the lodge before she could blink. “I saved your life, you vile creature!” she screamed.
“I trusted you!” Seed felt a pang of guilt. How strange—he had never felt it before. With the pearl stashed safely in his mouth, he alighted upside-down on a tree branch and watched the lodge to see how Azure was taking this defeat. She wasn’t in the lodge. That pearl was given to one of my ancestors by a sea rat he rescued!” the muskrat snarled as she made her way across the river, heading straight for Seed’stree.
“It was passed down generation to generation!” Seed was so surprised by her actions that he let go of the branch, onlybarely managing to catch hold of the next one down. He began to get frantic. Was she crazy? She was going to get herself killed! But wait, no. There were no hunters near this area. Satisfied, Seed dropped from the tree and took wing in the other direction.
Blam! Blam! The gunshots rang through the forest. The bat let out a startled cry and lost height, checking every part of him
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This story had a strong and captive beginning but lost my attention towards the end. However, I love, “The dark velvety sky.” Well done!
Comment by sabrina on December 1, 2009.
The story was definetly majestic in a way.
Comment by Brooke on December 5, 2009.
Yeah, it was good!
Comment by Samantha on December 9, 2009.
I really like it! I love animal stories too! Especially animal stories with talking animals. It gives the story more personality, I think. Keep up the good work!
Comment by Julia on December 13, 2009.
At first I was feeling a little sorry for the bat, but by the end he seemed lke a bad character. Great! Hop you write a sequel!
Comment by katie on January 9, 2010.
I love animal stories. I really enjoyed reading this.
Comment by Nancy on January 9, 2010.
wow. this was amazing. i loved the beginning, i could pictured everything perfectly in my head. well done Staci!!
Comment by Noa on January 11, 2010.
Well done Staci. It is a piece of beautiful writing indeed.
Comment by Umang on February 9, 2010.
great story! i loved it!i also love the name seed.
Comment by lee on February 27, 2010.
AWSOME!
Comment by RE on March 16, 2010.
I want to know if the muskrat got her pearl back and if she got killed! I lost attention but the beginning was okay. Overall just okay for me.
Comment by Madeleine on June 6, 2010.
Amazing story i wish i will get one of my stories published when i submit them and were did you think of something like that you have an awsome imagination!!!
Comment by mason shaffer on June 9, 2010.