I had always considered myself a pretty good runner, but when you’re running for your life you can never move fast enough. I glanced back, almost tripping over myself. I could see out of the corner of my eye his black mask, beady eyes, and his muddy fur coat. Though what scared me the most were his sharp canine teeth. Go ahead and laugh but I was running from… a dog. My flip-flops had fallen off my feet when I started running and the pavement was burning hot. I rounded the corner into my driveway, sprinting for my front door. I wasn’t always scared of dogs, but something happened that makes me run every time I see one.
Two years ago a dog ran into my yard where I was playing. When the dog started to wag his tail and bark I thought he was nice. So I tried to pet him, but apparently he didn’t want to be touched. When my hand got too close to his forehead he lashed out and bit me. I can only remember screaming and crying, waiting for the pain to go away. The next day when I woke up I was lying in the hospital bed with stitches on my right arm from my wrist to my elbow. Even though the dog had to go to the pound the fear and the scares he gave me never left.
I don’t know why but I never told anybody about what happened. You can imagine with my fear of something like this I was an easy target for bullies. No one wanted to hang out with me anymore. Even though before they were really only my friends because I was the school’s best track and cross-country runner (we had a really small school). It didn’t really bother me because I could always find something to do by myself, but my parents disagreed. “You need at least one friend, honey. Someone you can talk to other than us.” My parents always said that when they saw me reading, alone, up in the branches of a maple in our backyard. Though they were right, I was lonely. However, I didn’t want to become friends with anyone at my school, until I met someone who changed everything.
I knew the day would come when the teasing would become too much and I wouldn’t be able to take it any longer. On a Friday in October it happened and I ended up running to my house three miles away instead of taking the bus home. I went straight into the woods when I got home. I sat down in a pile of leaves, letting all the sadness and frustration that I was holding inside go. I listened to the hush of the trees and admired the beauty of the falling leaves.
Suddenly I heard whimpering, and it wasn’t mine. I glanced around quickly. At first I saw no one but then I saw the last thing I wanted to see, a dog. From instinct I stood up, legs tense, as if I was waiting for the starting gun in track, but the dog didn’t move. Even with my fear of canines a part of me wanted to go and comfort the wounded stray. Eventually, my heart overpowered my conscience and I couldn’t bear his pain. I knelt down ever so gently, so as not to frighten him, still he didn’t budge. Then carefully I reached out my right hand. My scar started to tingle, remembering the last time I was this close to a dog. Then, before I was ready the dog stretched out his neck, nudging his head into my hand. At that point I knew he needed me and I needed him.
The dog happily followed me home; sadly, he was limping the whole way. Some animal probably more frightening than any dog had wounded his back right foot. However, the expressions on my parents’ faces said it all. Their mouths had dropped to the floor speechless, and when I asked if we could keep him, they assured me that if he didn’t have rabies we could. Even after a few days with Scruffy (which is what we chose to name him) the statement “Dogs are man’s best friend” was proven true.
One day, a couple months after I found Scruffy, I was taking him for a walk and I noticed a sign on a telephone pole. The sign read:
Lost Dog
Medium height, brown eyes, mutt, male, scruffy light brown hair,
Answers to the name Copper.
If seen, please contact me at 544-0222,
or bring him to my house at
18 Sugar Hill Road, Easton, NH
Thank you,
Annie Samson
Next to the writing there was a picture of Scruffy or Copper. No doubt about it, that was a picture of the dog who was sitting right beside me. My heart shattered into a million pieces. The dog who had rescued me from drowning in sadness belonged to someone else.
That evening I sat in bed, staring at the sign that I had torn down in anger. Just then it occurred to me that Annie was probably feeling just as miserable as I had before I found “Copper.” At that moment I knew I had to return my friend to his rightful owner.
The next day I brought Copper to Easton to find his owner. He seemed to recognize the smell near the house, but I didn’t want to let him go. When I knocked on the door I knew I had done the right thing. The girl answered the door and almost cried with happiness that her dog had come home. She thanked me about twenty times before she took Copper. Then, right as she was closing the door, I whispered, “He’s a great dog.” She must have recognized the sadness in my eyes because she offered for me to come over after school and walk Copper with her. Annie and I quickly became best friends and to this day we still are. Surprisingly enough, I owe it all to a dog.




This just might help me overcome my fear of dogs. i enjoyed this story so much. Thanks for sharing this brilliant work of art with us!
Comment by Vivian knight on December 1, 2010.
Touching story – loved it, Hannah! (Whoever made the illustration is amazing!)
Comment by Amanda on December 4, 2010.
I am a big fan of dogs and this beautifully told story is fantastic. It is the best short story I have read for a long time.
Comment by Adine on December 14, 2010.
This is a very touching story – beautifully written, Hannah!
Comment by Amanda on December 20, 2010.
This story can be used in the 6th – 7th Grade and can achieve the goals of Danish national curriculum for English.
The text is a kind of fictional one that is easy enough to understand for the students in 6 -7 grade. Simple vocabulary, short statements and common subject, are the positive points of the text, which can catch the students attention to follow the story to the end.
In the story, we can find some of the social factors, which can anyone, face them in their own daily life. However, there is some uncommon vocabulary or expressions, which students perhaps can find them strange or difficult, but it makes them to question, discuss or use Dictionary. The language of the Text is the language of the main character in the story who is in the same age as our readers, which help them to put themselves in her specific situation by the time and by using their imaginations.
We can find a couple of social acts, such as being alone, finding a dog, seeing an announcement about a missing dog, feeling uncomfortable to have others dog, take it back to its owner, etc, which can give our students a good example and a good view about other countries social culture and compare it with their own society.
Comment by Mickael on January 2, 2011.
I loved your book so mutch.It expressed the feelings of someone who was scared but pushed it all aside to help a wounded dog.
Comment by honor cure on February 4, 2011.
Let me say…This is absolutely one of the most BEAUTIFUL stories I have ever read. I was bit once by my own dog, and when you described the bite my hand began to tingle! I’ve never helped a wounded dog, but a starving cat in my neighborhood, and it feels good to help one of our four-legged companions
Comment by Izzy on February 23, 2011.
Wow, it’s a great story! Is it something that happened to you? If it was, then I’m amazed, I’m not sure I would have actually returned the dog.
Comment by Isabel on February 24, 2011.
I like how the creature that she feared the most ended as the one who actually helps her out of loneliness
Well Done
Comment by jane on March 16, 2011.
was a wonerful and you expressed loads of emotions in the story
about some one would had a phobia about dogs.
Comment by sadia on April 3, 2011.
i love this story you wrote. I give it ten paws! you got talent!
Comment by msfuturewriter on April 4, 2011.
This is a really good story. I love how you show her emotions, and the ending is wonderful.
Comment by Fellowwriter on May 10, 2011.
Amazing story! You go, girl! The writing style had qualities in it that most high-schoolers lack. Also, you did a good job of making the ending happy, but turning it into something unexpected.
This story is better than most of the 9th grader’s! (my mom is a writing teacher)
All I can say is keep writing!
Comment by fictionlover on June 3, 2011.
This story is wonderful and easy to relate to. I was terrified of the tiniest chihauhau to the biggest Great Dane, but eventually overcame my fear when the biggest dog I’ve ever met, befriended me. Keep writing!
Comment by Anonymous on June 5, 2011.
i simply love the way you start and it caught me by surprise
and it related to personal experience.Good job.
Comment by shafe on June 15, 2011.
I can honestly say that I am terrified of dogs, not little Chihuahuas, I hope I spelled that right, but Great Danes and dogs that tend to bark a lot, like a small dog named Badger that some of my family has. I can pet him and scract him behind the ears, but if he begins barking, tearing up his toys, or shaking them around I’m terrified of him. This story related to me in a way no other story has ever done. I began to be afraid of dogs because of that little dog when I was little and thought he wanted me to pet him. Half of this review contains rubbish, so I’ll be breif: I always want to help strays, I can easily help cats without homes, but dogs? It’s nearly impossible. I hope that this story will give me the strength to march up to any dog, pet him, coo over him, march off to another dog, whether it be a chihuahua or Badger or a Greata Dane.
This was an amazing story for someone that is twelve and I hope that I will be able to read more of Hannah’s work, whether it is in a Stone Soup again, a different magazine, or a book. If you haven’t ever been afraid of dogs, Hannah I can sincerely say, this story is genius! If you have than you have an amazing talent for being able to think of the exact words you need in a story! The description is super and I recomend this story! (:
Comment by Luna on June 30, 2011.
I remember reading this in the Archives. It’s a good story. You have style, it flows perfectly.
Keep writing
jessiethought
Comment by jessiethought on July 3, 2011.
OMG! This story is great! The illistrations are brill, too! Well done!
Comment by Eve on July 23, 2011.
I loved your story!;-) I remember when our family got a new dog. I accidently stepped on her…ouch. she sank her teeth into my right arm.:’( I was afraid of her…until we found out she was a guard dog:-P. A++. Awesome job, bookworm.
Comment by bookworm on August 6, 2011.
AWESOME JOB! I loved it!
Comment by ToxicWave on August 23, 2011.
That was a absolutely BEAUTIFUL story! I enjoyed it SOOOO much! Are you a budding writer? Well you seem to be!:) I love writing stories SOOOO much! U r AWESOME!!!!:)
Comment by Emmy on August 25, 2011.
♥I love this story… How did you come up with the idea?
Comment by Sophia on September 5, 2011.
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Comment by Sophia on September 5, 2011.
It was the best story i have heard in a really long time so it made me happy. My aunts Gracie is my best friend, but when i was little i used to be scared to death of her and i had to have my aunt carry me over her. It was heart warming and a very beautiful story. You are an amazing writer.
Comment by Allie on September 5, 2011.
Wow! That’s really great! I think I’m least afraid of dogs now! I used to be horrified, but thanks now I’m not too afraid anymore!
Comment by Julia on September 7, 2011.
i have no friends
Comment by darius meas on September 16, 2011.
this storie was really sad and but it was also the best storie i read
Comment by gloria on September 19, 2011.
the story was like what happen to my family members but even worst I liked the story
Comment by gloria on September 19, 2011.
Comment by gloria on September 19, 2011.
omg i love this story much i rembember trying to find a freind
Comment by teshera on September 19, 2011.
i would say this is the best story ever!!!!!!!!! haha
<3
Comment by teshera on September 23, 2011.
OMG i love this story,this story was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it<3<3<3
this is the best story about a dog is the best!!11
Comment by Yasmeen on September 23, 2011.
I am a bit scared of dogs. I prefer cats. It was a really nice story even though I don’t really like dogs. I might even decide not to be afraid of dogs now that I read this story.
Comment by Edie on December 3, 2011.
This I a familiar story that I have heard in some novels. You ‘ this extremely well, and your good use of vocabulary makes this a masterpiece. I don’t have a dog of my own, but I want one. I hope that you continue to write!
Comment by Gus on December 15, 2011.
This is a well written, inspiring story. My friend, the other day found a stray dog, and for now he is going to keep him. I have always wanted a dog, and this story just made me want one more. Who made the drawing? Wow. That is a great illustration. Nice story.
Comment by Josh on December 15, 2011.
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Comment by Mr. Joe on December 15, 2011.
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Comment by Mrs. Jones McMcField on December 15, 2011.
Touching story. I’ve always loved dogs. Oh and come look at this blog you’ll find some good stuff.http://pdroom212.edublogs.org/ .
Comment by Ashwin on December 15, 2011.
Woof Woof! (scooby approves!) Check out scoobies website at http://pdroom212.edublogs.org/ Remember kids Scooby loves you!!!
Comment by Scooby Doo! on December 15, 2011.
I loved it! I enjoyed reading it while experiencing it for the first time. I envy all good artists and writers. That means you. You are truly a J.K. Rowling. (Take it from me.)
Comment by Iona Duncan on December 28, 2011.
I love dogs!! That was a beautiful story, I nearly cried when I read it!!
Comment by Mary on January 7, 2012.
This is the kind of book that I have wanted to write. Each book that I write has dialouge, a character, actions, adventure…But I am lacking in the one thing that you have most. And that is description. Voice. Something that gives emotion into the story. That feeling that doesn’t just TELL you something, but SHOWS you what is happening. I wish I had your amazing talent for writing!!!
Comment by Gabby-Age 11 on February 2, 2012.