Pursuit
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Her pudgy feet ran through the grass
Sparkling in the morning dew
Her footprints left a trail behind her
Impressions on the cold ground
She ran
Her feet stumbling on unfamiliar territory
She tripped and stumbled to the ground
She rose without hesitation and again began her pursuit
Of the beautiful winged creature
Its wings carried it higher
Faster than her little feet could take her
Yet she ran
Willing herself to go faster
She closed the gap
It was nearly in her reach
She sprung from the ground
A single finger brushing a delicate wing
Then it was off and she hit the ground
It fluttered away
Soaring to the sky
While she stayed grounded
Her face misted
Her knees green
But with a smile forming
She accomplished her goal
She touched the butterfly
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That was a very, very cute poem! I enjoyed the way she showed how ambitious she was as the girl raced across the grass, trying to touch a beutiful little bug, the butterfly. Nice work!
Comment by Samantha on November 23, 2009.
That was a very cute poem! I loved the way Kym showed how the girl was ambitious to leap up and grasp the beautiful bug, the butterfly. I liked how this poem showed spirit and confidence to finish a task despite difficulties. Nice job Kym!
Comment by Samantha on November 24, 2009.
I love it! It was beautiful!
Comment by Brooke on December 5, 2009.
Nice article thank you for sharing!
Comment by georgia on December 14, 2009.
nice blending of words and thoughts
Comment by bhau on December 28, 2009.
Enjoyed the post
Comment by JD Webb on January 25, 2010.
Very interesting blend of thoughts and ideas to create one very gripping poem.
Comment by Benjamin on May 14, 2010.
this is a really good poem i l♥ved it
Comment by elkhorn on May 17, 2010.
I love it! I thought it was a pegasus or something that she was after- the ending was completely unexpected!
Comment by Porcupine on July 15, 2010.
Nice job Kym
It’s a beautiful poem. I can’t image what it would be like to touch a butterfly. Must be cool, though.
Comment by Angel of Arumdin on July 16, 2010.
Great poem. I especially liked how you blended the word together to make it sound like more than just words. Well, as the saying goes, “Writer’s paint pictures with words.”
Comment by Matthew on July 23, 2010.
Great poem. I especially liked how you blended the word together to make it sound like more than just words. Well, as the saying goes, “Writers paint pictures with words.”
Comment by Matthew on July 23, 2010.