My black-and-gray rooster crows.
The sound of birds’ chatter
filters through the morning.
I open the icy gate
and walk the familiar trail.
A cool, damp haze
swirls around me.
I carry the rusty bucket
filled with a ton of feed;
It pours like sifting sand
into the concrete trough.
Cowbells reverberate
as they prance over the hill.
Stopping beneath my willow tree,
I watch them eat.
I turn around
to head home,
But first I pick the first
Wild buttercup.



it’s o.k. but nice with good description
Comment by faller on May 6, 2011.
I could imagine the scene. Great use of imagery.
Comment by Mable on May 16, 2011.
Yes, I can imagine this. I can feel the haze swirling around me.
Though it could use a little editing, to make what’s happening a little clearer.
Comment by jessiethought on July 3, 2011.
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Comment by arnaudzvmat on July 22, 2011.
I think it’s pretty good. It sound like what it would be like on a farm. Though it does need a little editing here and there it nice.
Comment by Livvy on July 26, 2011.
Good work although it could be much better. The descriptive detail is wonderful although it dosent sound to much like a poem. It needs more of a story line to it. Overall-Good job.
Comment by Sam on September 18, 2011.
It is alright although it doesn’t sound to much like a poem. You described the scene very well and I really felt like I was on the farm. You could, though, maybe use more commas. It does need more editing and could be much better. Overall-okay job.
Comment by Sam on September 18, 2011.
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Comment by JimmyBob on September 18, 2011.
well thhis story is about nature almost and i think it is a wonderful story i love nature
:)
this is a good story
Comment by kimberly irene haley on September 19, 2011.
I good almost smell the cool farm air : ) good job!
Comment by turtleluver1212 on November 2, 2011.
I really loved this poem. I could see it as a poem and a story. I want to become an author. maybe I will be able to write like you someday. it reminded me of my cabin.
Comment by Edie on December 3, 2011.
You really make me feel like I’m there! I love your use of words too!
Comment by Cat M. on December 15, 2011.
Nice poem. Oh yeah and watch all of my movies. Now I have to leave I need to practice my karate!
Comment by Chuck Norris on December 15, 2011.
Cool!
Comment by Jessie on December 17, 2011.
I get it..
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